Advance Reader Reviews
I don't like fiction... SO HOW? How can you make me like it? I would love to continue reading it!
Your style and ideas are both flawless! Great story, can't wait to keep reading!!
[I was] disappointed when it ended. I've read your piece three times ... You manage to fit so much information in one small space, yet it isn't jumbled or cluttered, it's definitely not wordy, and it flows beautifully. The world fell away when I read it. I love the world you've created, and would love to explore more of it, and find out why they live how they live. ... I need more now. You're killing me.
This is actually brilliant. I can't wait to read more. You definitely deserve more reads honey, this first chapter is practically perfect. I couldn't ask for more from the beginning of a novel. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to reading more!
Wow you write very imaginatively and beautifully, I really enjoyed reading this. The characters are finely drawn and it takes skill to make so many unexplained things (the 'Match', 'Preparation' rooms, etc.) not distract or confuse the reader too much. I really like that you include familial differences in class attitudes too. ... Great work, looking forward to more.
Wow this was amazing. ... This is going to be one of my favorites books on Wattpad, I think.
This story is amazing and one of my favorites on Wattpad!
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